Short film: update
-After receiving feedback from my first cut, I have planned out a few potential sequences during Ellie's monologue in order to keep the audience's engagement. I have also cut down the narration to allow myself to have more time to alter my ending. Originally, Ellie being taken into the wardrobe and her mum knocking on the door was the finale. However, I've decided that I will end it with Ellie's mum coming into her room noticing the window was open, thinking Ellie had escaped and her running outside panicking and screaming for her daughter to return home.